Jessica, Your description of both texts is detailed, but I fee like you rely too heavily on the words/language used in the studies themselves. As such, your personal analysis feels a bit lacking. Also, are the intended audiences only those looking to lose weight/diet? What about parents and medical doctors, to say the least? Lastly, careful: this is not MLA citation style. If you need help, ask me.
Jessica,
ReplyDeleteYour description of both texts is detailed, but I fee like you rely too heavily on the words/language used in the studies themselves. As such, your personal analysis feels a bit lacking.
Also, are the intended audiences only those looking to lose weight/diet? What about parents and medical doctors, to say the least? Lastly, careful: this is not MLA citation style. If you need help, ask me.
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